Is this poem too short to be effective?

Venturing into

green, dense woods,

wanting to get lost

to

find myself,

I discovered

hard, dry ground

with

cavernous cracks,

mimicking my

reality.
I like the content.

The flow was a bit awkward.

When the poem is short, it really needs to flow well.



Maybe:





Venturing

into green, dense woods,

wanting to get lost

to find myself,

I discovered

hard, dry ground

with



cavernous cracks,

mimicking

my reality.
No poem is too short to be effective! I do love this though, its very nice! Keep up the great work!



*pixie*
Any poem can be short and powerful and punctuated however you want it, since you are the author.
No, that